TARGET: DOCUMENT ARTIST ANALYSIS BETTER (INCLUDING MORE INFORMATION SUCH AS WHY ARTISTS DO WHAT THEY DO AND WHAT EFFECT THAT HAS ON HOW YOU INTERPRET THE PHOTOS).
Initial Tasks: thoughtful presentation. They are all quite similar in appearance. Can you include other depictions of movement to achieve your target grade?
Task 1: History of Photography Well researched, basic facts are here. Thoughtful layout however, how could you also demonstrate your understanding of the development of technology.
Answer - I will add other images showing examples of the Daguerrotype and the dry plate photographic process. Done- 30/09- well done
Task 2: Camera Obscura clear description and appropriate photos to document you process. How important is controlling the focal length? Done
Task 3: Darkroom Practice Once again, good images support the writing but there is a lack of subject specific vocab. How do you control Aperture, Time and Exposure when working with the enlarger?